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Band 8

You have seen a job advertisement in your local newspaper that interests you. The role is that of a football club manager. Write the recruiter a letter to apply for this position. Tell them about your qualifications and skills. Tell them about your experience Ask for an interview

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Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of manager of the football club. I came across your advertisement in a local newspaper. I believe I am a qualified candidate for
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 my strong credentials. I hold a bachelor’s degree in the field of management. I am pleased to inform you that I have highly developed interpersonal skills and a strong work ethic. With regard to work experience, I was a manager at my local club for two years. I always treated my colleagues with respect. With the help of the team, we were able to achieve a great record and win so many competitions. Please find attached a copy of my CV for
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 details. I am available for an interview any day of the week. Should you need to contact me, I can be reached
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 [email protected]. Thank you for your precious time and attention. Yours faithfully, Sara Rezaei

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task achievement
Consider adding a sentence to express your enthusiasm for the position or to explain why this job particularly interests you.
coherence cohesion
Make sure that each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next for even better coherence.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear and logical structure, making it easy for the reader to follow the points being made.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter, showing respect to the recipient.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable for a job application, being both formal and polite, which effectively conveys professionalism.
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