Examine the arguments in favour and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.

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have been used for research purposes in the ancient and
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has proved researchers right and wrong in equal measure,
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essay will explore the advantages and disadvantages' and draw a conclusion in the end.
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have been used for analysis especially in matters related to health
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to give medicine
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safe for humans and trusted by the masses
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approved by
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for disease and control among other
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bodies.
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, rats are commonly used for investigative reasons purposely dedicated to
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well being it is always quoted in many drug pamphlets that medicine was tested and is safe for humans.
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are endangered whereas they should be protected once an experiment is carried on any critter it is not definite that
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creature will overcome the side effects of the medicament in question
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could result
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complications or even death
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the species is at risk of being wiped out, as earlier defined,
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rats ,monkeys are
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considered for
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exploration among other creatures with a notion from scientists that they have a resemblance to the human beings.
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used in biomedical research have suffered and died in the laboratories
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is rarely a topic of discussion and reduces their numbers every single day. In conclusion, there is a strong case for use to advance scientific and medical knowledge, and in assessing the safety of new medicines. The use of
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should only be when there is no alternative
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and should be subject to careful regulation.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • controversial
  • prevalence
  • scientific research
  • proponents
  • opponents
  • medical breakthroughs
  • vaccines
  • treatments
  • critical data
  • regulatory frameworks
  • ethical guidelines
  • minimize suffering
  • moral objections
  • animal rights
  • species differences
  • unreliable results
  • alternatives to animal testing
  • in vitro testing
  • computer modeling
  • volunteer microdosing
  • nuanced
  • complexity
  • weighing
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