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Internet should be used for children. Do you agree?

#internet #children
The
Internet
 is a vast network that connects computers all over the world, people can share information and communicate from anywhere with an
Internet
 connection. The majority of people believe that the
internet
 is a useful resource for
children
 because of its wild range of education programs.
However
, it is justifiable to say that there are many disadvantages to
children
. From my perspective, the
internet
 has a lot of negative effects.
First
 of all, some
internet
 resources are unsuitable for
children
. Normally,
children
 surf the
internet
 when staying alone.
That is
 to say, they do not have parents to warn them when they found improper information.
For example
, some
websites
 have information
that is
 inappropriate for kids
such
 as violence, suicide, Non-consent.
In addition
, some
websites
 are insecure.
For instance
, some
websites
 are not reviewed by the relevant authorities, so there will have some
websites
 that are controlled by terrorists and
this
 will cause a lot of damage to
internet
 users.
Furthermore
, the
internet
 is dangerous to health. When we surf the
Internet
 for a long
time
, we will be in one position for a long
time
.
Thus
, it causes muscle fatigue and seizure.
Moreover
, when your eyes look at the screen of electronic devices for a long
time
. It causes eyes irritation or vision impairment. To conclude, some
internet
 resources are unsuitable, unsafe and when people surf the
internet
 for a long
time
 it will make bad effects on their body. For these reasons, the
internet
 has a lot of disadvantages.
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