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Men should go to work and women place is in the home. To what extend do you agree or disagree

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There is an argument for
role
 distribution between
men
 and women. Several people assert that males should take the
role
 of working and Females should pay attention to choirs in the home and parenting.
However
, I do not agree with
this
 statement for some reasons.
To begin
 with, the way how those people separate the assigned duties between
men
 and women is not a trendy standard in modern society and is
also
 a biased strategy. Before the Industrial Revolution, most work required physical resources, which naturally led
men
 to go out for work and females to stay at home
while
 focusing on parenting and
housework
. Because of that, the idea of separating the roles in that way was widespread.
However
, the pattern of industry nowadays is quite different and diverse compared to the past.
Moreover
, a lot of fields of business industries in the modern world need more female worker because of their efficiency and
specialty
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. Frequently, female leaders run important business.
Additionally
, some surveys revealed the percentage of
men
 in
housework
 has been skyrocketing in the
last
 few decades.
According to
 an interview with a man who is taking a
role
 in
housework
, he commented that he found his special ability to care for babies and clean the house,
whereas
 his wife said she desired to achieve her career development. Regarding
this
, it seems they found the perfect
role
 distribution between them and both are happy with their current positions. In conclusion, the statement that
men
 must go to work, and women must take
housework
 positions is a prejudiced and old custom that was fit in the Stone Age.
Thus
, the standard of separating roles should be more focused on an individual's abilities.
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