Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Some people think that the
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is a waste, and we have more important aspects and Use synonyms
sectors
where the money should be used. I disagree with the notion because I believe that Use synonyms
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development
. Developed countries have good Use synonyms
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curriculum in their schools and they spend a great deal of money to foster Use synonyms
arts
, which in a way, help preserve the culture of a country and inspire youngsters to become more patriotic. Some governments believe that Use synonyms
art
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For example
, most children in China who have won science competitions are great at other artistic skills Linking Words
such
as playing the piano or painting. They believe by developing students' artistic skills they could train their brains to think more logically and intellectually. So, by piloting money on Linking Words
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, investing the Linking Words
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could boost up the revenue for the country. Most foreigners are interested in seeing various world heritages, artworks and cultural variations. Many countries develop tourist places and displays Use synonyms
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For instance
, in Indonesia, Bali has become an interesting place for tourists because of the local Balinese Linking Words
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government
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arts
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of other Use synonyms
sectors
.
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budget
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art
is worth it because it can improve intellection for their society and bring economic income for local residents without affecting other Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite