Since the beginning of the 20th century, the number of endangered species has increased significantly and we have witnessed more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time.

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In the span of the
last
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two decades, animal
extinction
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has become an important and concerning issue for modern society. The reasons for
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problem could be population growth and increasing levels of
pollution
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,
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attention must be paid to overcoming and reducing these factors.
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, the number of people living on Earth is rocketing day by day, which leads to the growing demand for food. Animal
meat
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being
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one of the most popular food choices, is,
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, getting consumed more and more.
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results in people murdering millions of animals just to satisfy human needs and the likeliness of each species to get extinct is
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rising steadily.
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, different types of
pollution
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can
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explain the reason why mass
extinction
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is a hot topic these days. Contaminated water,
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, forces fishes to leave their habitat and those who cannot settle and adapt to a new environment will die out.
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, water
pollution
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can
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cause the poisoning of fishes or animals that drink from the polluted lake or river. In order for these issues to be solved, some actions must be taken by both citizens and the government. One solution is to encourage people to start eating less
meat
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. Nowadays, with the rising popularity of veganism and vegetarianism, more food is available that do not contain any
meat
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or even animal products. Even if
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method does not completely stop the
extinction
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of the species, it will definitely help in slowing down the consequences and take time to figure out better solutions. Another suggestion is that governments ought to require their citizens to follow the “3R rule”, which is recycling, reusing and reducing.
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way we can kill two birds with one stone.
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, both the problem of
pollution
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and the problem of
extinction
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will be taken into consideration and overcome. In conclusion, the declining number of fauna is currently considered to be worrisome,
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we need to consume less
meat
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or no
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at all,
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the rule of 3Rs is a good idea to reduce the causes of
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concern.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • mass extinctions
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystems
  • ecological imbalance
  • human well-being
  • illegal hunting
  • poaching
  • habitat destruction
  • climate change
  • awareness
  • education
  • conservation
  • laws
  • regulations
  • international cooperation
  • sustainable practices
  • protected areas
  • public awareness
  • community-based conservation efforts
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