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Some people say it’s a waste of time to plan for the future. We should live in the present. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Planning ahead for
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future
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 is
most
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 crucial aspect
for
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 human
life
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.A chunk of
individuals
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 opines that to reduce stress people should live in the present whilst others are sceptical about it.I;
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 believe that
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 approach has its own benefits but they planning for
future
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 is more advantageous for a person.
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future
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 is
cornerstone
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the cornerstone
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 of success.
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,
individuals
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 lacking plans get derailed from their track and met with failure so goals give us focus and motivation
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 essential for the path to achieve better results.
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,there is
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 held opinion that
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 mind works like a targeted missile,we will get on what we put concentration.
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,
plan
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the plan
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 can get us prepared for the
future
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such
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 as the habit of saving money from
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 stages of
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 can help us through difficult circumstances.
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, one of my friends started preparing for his
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IPC
 exam while we were in school
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 helps him to clear his exam in
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first
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 attempt
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therefore
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planning
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 give
better
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a better
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 understanding of the issues.
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,numerous
individuals
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 have the notion that
live
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 a
life
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 of happiness and
stress free
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,they should have to live in the moment.Some people tend to overthink
about
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the
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future
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 events as consequence they
overwhelmed
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 by anxiety and other mental problems.
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,nowadays,students are under pressure due to rising competition
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 will not only
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effect
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 their academic
score
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 but
also
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 deteriorating their health. To conclude,I believe that planning ahead is vital to achieve success and it
keep
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 us away from distractions that can prove negative to
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individuals
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life
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 even though it may be
bit
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 peeved.
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