Many museum charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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the current time, there are many

museums

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which

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are charging an entry fee, while there are others

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not demand any fees to enter the

museum

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. In my opinion, exhibitions must charge an

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fee for

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in the maintenance and restoration of the

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. Overall, it seems to me that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. There are

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for charging an entry ticket. The main reason is that

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collected from the

visitors

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can be utilized to maintain and develop the

museum

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. One good illustration of

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is that collecting the tickets can be used to cover the utility bills, repairing

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and staff

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. Another reason why I support the notion is that if it is a historical

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, the

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charge could be used in the restoration of some old objects, including paintings, costumes and weapons. It is

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possible to say that maintaining a large

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costs

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a huge amount of

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and the revenue earned from the

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could be a good source of

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to do that. Not all

museums

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are funded by the government and sometimes

museum

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’s fund is not enough to cover all the

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it requires. If no

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is taken from the

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,

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would have to be shut down. So

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fee is a good way to tackle

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issue.

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, there are some drawbacks

of

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admission

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charges. To be more precise,

visitors

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might choose not to visit these places, which are charged.

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,

charged

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lost

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their popularity

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art fans and have a decrease in their extra incomes, which will be slow their development. In conclusion, the advantage of charging an

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fare at the

museums

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overcome the disadvantages. It seems to me that it would be better to charge and provide additional facilities for the

visitors

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so that they leave with a lot of satisfaction.