Many museum charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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the current time, there are many

museums

which

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are charging an entry fee, while there are others

do

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not demand any fees to enter the

museum

. In my opinion, exhibitions must charge an

admission

fee for

using

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in the maintenance and restoration of the

museums

. Overall, it seems to me that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. There are

many

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reason

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for charging an entry ticket. The main reason is that

money

collected from the

visitors

can be utilized to maintain and develop the

museum

. One good illustration of

this

is that collecting the tickets can be used to cover the utility bills, repairing

costs

and staff

costs

. Another reason why I support the notion is that if it is a historical

museum

, the

admission

charge could be used in the restoration of some old objects, including paintings, costumes and weapons. It is

also

possible to say that maintaining a large

museum

costs

a huge amount of

money

and the revenue earned from the

visitors

could be a good source of

money

to do that. Not all

museums

are funded by the government and sometimes

museum

’s fund is not enough to cover all the

costs

it requires. If no

money

is taken from the

visitors

,

museums

would have to be shut down. So

admission

fee is a good way to tackle

this

issue.

However

, there are some drawbacks

of

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admission

charges. To be more precise,

visitors

might choose not to visit these places, which are charged.

As a result

,

charged

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place might

lost

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their popularity

between

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art fans and have a decrease in their extra incomes, which will be slow their development. In conclusion, the advantage of charging an

admission

fare at the

museums

overcome the disadvantages. It seems to me that it would be better to charge and provide additional facilities for the

visitors

so that they leave with a lot of satisfaction.