Many people believe that social networking sites(such as Facebook)have had a huge impact on both the individuals and society? To what extent do you agree?

Social media in century XXI is
one
of the most important issues on
communication
and
one
of the main reasons to take our attention is the usages of the internet.
One
good
example
is
Facebook
who has more users than many countries,
therefore
the social impact is huge and
this
can be good or bad. In
this
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my opinion is that Government and society have to regulate the usage of
this
side
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and others that can get a deep impact on folk and society
behave
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.
For instance
,
one
of the big problems on
Facebook
is the fake news, those look so real that people believe it, and the result is good for those that were looking to getting attention and give a different direction to the people. A direction, that they had decided as a strategy to win more follows and increase the number of people that can be in line with their objectives.
One
example
is the Election for
new
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government,
Facebook
is a new tool for all candidates, and they had used it in a bad way to attack their opponents. The result is that using fakes news,
they
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reduce the votes of their opposition. Not all is bad using sites like
Facebook
,
for
example
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many
business
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businesses
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had increased their sales using new ways of promotion paying ads
in
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Facebook
. The seller
have
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the opportunity to
increased
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sales with new channels of promotion, showing new products, offering new
services
and more guaranties of their products and most importantly, they can reduce the budget of marketing. The impact that merchandise and
services
can get through
Facebook
is tremendous. Another interesting point is the consumer, they
also
have many benefits if they use
facebook
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to buy.
For
example
, they can get more options before deciding what product or
services
they want. Make a better search and do the best purchase. Buyers can get better
services
because they have a new channel of
communication
and they can give a good or bad recommendation according to their experiences on
Facebook
. They have a straight way
communication
with their vendors and all community that are
also
interested in it.
Finally
, what I agree is that
Facebook
and another similar side must be regulated by Government and society, and be clear about what can be done and whatnot, be clear on new rules of
communication
using
this
kind of media.
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