You recently went shopping at the local supermarket. When you got home and noticed your bill, you found that you had been charged for items you did not purchase. Write a letter to the supermarket manager explaining what has happened. Tell the manager you are not able to collect the refund and suggest a refund method and say what do you want him to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I visited your supermarket located near the garden yesterday

where

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I bought some groceries.

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, upon reaching home, I found out that I

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been charged for the charger

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I had not bought. The bill number is 123456. I have

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attached the photocopy for your reference.

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, I am asking you to refund the amount

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to the charger. As I am living in the Thaltej area, it is not possible for me to come and collect the refund amount. I would suggest paying me via a UPI

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is more convenient for both of us. I want you to refund the amount as soon as possible

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by tomorrow

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the mistake was on your end. I can be reached at my email [email protected] in case any

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information is required from my end. I hope we can resolve

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promptly. Yours faithfully, Kishan

kishanpatel2550

Mar 4, 2023

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Clear note of the problem and bill that you refer to

formality

Polite formal start and end

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Shows how you want money back and how to pay

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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151 words

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