The government should control the internet to reduce cyber-crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's world, the

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plays a significant role in people's lives, especially in teenagers'

life

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. It can lead to

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cyber-crime

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cybercrime

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and security if young people recklessly share more private information on online platforms. It is more than a personal problem. Companies can

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be attacked because of

cyber-crime

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.

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, I agree

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the government should control the use of the

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so that it could decrease issues regarding

safety

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and crime.

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, it is apparent that most people access online platforms

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than in the past because of the

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and developed technology.

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easy access, some

users

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have not been careful

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using online platforms.

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, some teenagers usually update their real-time locations on Instagram.

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, they might unintentionally post their personal information that should not

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in public. So, online

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can get into harmful situations

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as robbery and deception. The government should take responsibility for

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matter.

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,

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, there are numerous

cyber-crimes

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cyber crimes

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such

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as hacking. It is not only about the personal

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of

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Internet

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users

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, but

cyber-crime

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can affect the bigger area.

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, some employees might click the link which leads virus

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their computer system

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they get hacked by the hacker who releases the virus. There are

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important data of the company in employees'

computer

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computers

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so those data can

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.

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,

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several problems, the governments should play a role in the control of

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the

Internet

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. They should limit the age of

users

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in

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some websites or applications which are inappropriate for some ages

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as content about violence.

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, governments should closely monitor online

users

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to ensure their

safety

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and increase the comfort of citizens. In conclusion, I personally agree

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the government should carefully control the

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by limiting the ages and monitoring. It can ensure

safety

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and decrease

cyber-crime

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.