You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend . In this letter: Give details about the concert. Describe how you won the tickets. Explain why you have have chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear Vladislav,
How are you? I hope you are doing great . I am writing you
this
letter in order to summon courteously you to the association of the group The weekend.
As you know, this
correspondence is held in Khakimiyat near our school, this
performance will be this
week on Friday 16 March in the evening at 20:00, a songster from America came to us to give his show, a high-profile and prominent vocalist Abel Makkonen sings there, and there is a support group there.
Currently a lottery was held in our local market; moreover
, many people took part in it, but I also
decided to take part in it. The conditions of the lottery are simple: you put money in and it spins, giving you a prize, I spun it with all my might and that is
lucky break, I won 2 tickets to the band's concert The weekend.
I was looking for someone to go to this
splendifereous performance with and decided that with you I would be more luxurious and joviality since you are my most unwavering friend.
I look forward to your answer with great enthusiasm.
Kind regards,
ArthurSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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Structure
Ensure that your letter has a clear and logical structure. Your introduction and closing are good, but the body paragraphs could benefit from clearer delineation of ideas. Consider organizing paragraphs around single ideas, such as one paragraph for concert details, another for how you won the tickets, and a third for why you're inviting your friend.
Coherence
Work on the coherence of your text. This includes making sure your ideas flow naturally from one to the next. Use transition words and phrases to help guide your reader through your letter.
Tone
Try to maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter. The tone should be friendly and inviting, reflecting the personal nature of the invitation. Use phrases and vocabulary that convey warmth and personal connection.
Completeness
To fully achieve the task, ensure you provide detailed information about each point requested in the prompt. While you’ve touched on all the required aspects, expanding on each with more specific details, such as more about the concert and why specifically you chose this friend, would enhance your response.
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