Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art

is the externalization of

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individual skills and talent through their

creativity

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thinking.

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, some say that the artists should have

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full

freedom

to deliver any

thoghs

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thoughts

thighs

and plans by their

drwaings

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drawings

. While others think that an artist should have some restrictions because total

freedom

may be

detrimental

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affect

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on

society

by drawing. In

this

essay, I

also

believe that some rules and regulations might be avoided any detrimental effects.

To begin

with, certainly, complete

freedom

will be promoted arts to any

society

,

this

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best way to deliver any information and plan to tell people with their creative drawings.

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, arts have

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because any tough ideas are easily expressed to

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and the artists should have more

freedom

how much beyond the limit,

thus

, they can think

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innovative way. Taking to coronavirus,

for example

, many artists have drawn so many innovative pictures for people will understand easily about what is and how to affect and how we protect ourselves. Obviously, the creator has full

freedom

when they draw.

Nevertheless

, the authorities should be given some rules and regulations to the creator. Some pictures may

be affect

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adverse to

society

, what I mean by

this

, some pictures can stimulate people wrong way

such

as political issues.

For instance

, the creator draws about the political issues without having any permission of the particular authority, while that drawing person might be taken over

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to draw,

consequently

, folks may be believed wrong information by

art

.

hence

, an artist should have some restrictions. To conclude,

art

is

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one kind of

skills

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and talent. complete

freedom

is

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essential part of promoting

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art

,

tehre

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there

the

shoukld

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should

be have some restrictions to drawing.

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, I strongly agree with

this

staatement

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statement

for some rules and regulations may be avoided any

deterimental

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detrimental

affects

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effects

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on

society

.