Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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individual skills and talent through their
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thinking.
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, some say that the artists should have
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full
freedom
to deliver any
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and plans by their
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. While others think that an artist should have some restrictions because total
freedom
may be
detrimental
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on
society
by drawing. In
this
essay, I
also
believe that some rules and regulations might be avoided any detrimental effects.
To begin
with, certainly, complete
freedom
will be promoted arts to any
society
,
this
is
a
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best way to deliver any information and plan to tell people with their creative drawings.
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, arts have
a magical features
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because any tough ideas are easily expressed to
arts
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and the artists should have more
freedom
how much beyond the limit,
thus
, they can think
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innovative way. Taking to coronavirus,
for example
, many artists have drawn so many innovative pictures for people will understand easily about what is and how to affect and how we protect ourselves. Obviously, the creator has full
freedom
when they draw.
Nevertheless
, the authorities should be given some rules and regulations to the creator. Some pictures may
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adverse to
society
, what I mean by
this
, some pictures can stimulate people wrong way
such
as political issues.
For instance
, the creator draws about the political issues without having any permission of the particular authority, while that drawing person might be taken over
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to draw,
consequently
, folks may be believed wrong information by
art
.
hence
, an artist should have some restrictions. To conclude,
art
is
the
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one kind of
skills
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and talent. complete
freedom
is
a
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essential part of promoting
a
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art
,
tehre
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be have some restrictions to drawing.
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, I strongly agree with
this
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for some rules and regulations may be avoided any
deterimental
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affects
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