In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In modern times there has been a tendency of people deciding to buy their own houses
instead
of renting one. For some of them,
this
is a justified behaviour and, in my personal opinion, the advantages of owning your own space outweigh the minimal drawbacks.
To begin
with, one of the main advantages of purchasing a house is that, you can do any type of improvements to it without asking for permission.
For example
, when someone is renting an apartment in most cases if you need to make a hole in the wall for a shelf, you need to ask the owner and, sometimes, that means paying an extra fee.
On the other hand
,
this
is far from happening in an apartment that you have bought. Drawing from my own experience, when I was studying for my bachelor's degree, I had to move to another city and rent a floor, even though all the services were included (wifi, water, and electricity), I wasn't allowed to make any type of adjustments to the
place
. While no one can deny that
this
is a very logical restriction since many people may abuse and partly destroy the
place
, there is nothing more gratifying than being able to do anything you want with your flat. Another important advantage involves the possibility of giving your family a
place
that everyone can call home in where you can happily get older and your children can grow old. When someone rents a house and has a family, there are always going to be some inconveniences.
For instance
, you will always have to pay for monthly rent and in current times, rents can be extremely high, forbidding yourself to use your money differently.
Furthermore
, there is going to be a time when your children will go to university and on the majority of the occasions, you will have to pay a lot of money for their living expenses.
This
situation can be avoided by making a single investment, of course,
this
situation is not always simple since buying a property is expensive but, the compensation overshadows the struggle. All things mentioned, there are clear and convincing reasons why people are deciding to purchase their properties
instead
of renting a
place
. Even if those reasons are for the good of the family or just because you want to have your own space in the world, there are few and almost imperceptible inconveniences that can be easily overtaken.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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