In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the present day, the presence of fast

food

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society has been increasingly popular among people

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compared to the past.

This

kind of

food

can result in damage

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health

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the health

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of the individuals not only in short term but

also

in long term, resulting in serious

health

disorders and

also

in fatal

illness

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. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the idea of governments and authorities create laws and fees stricter to control the presence of these products.

First

and foremost, fast foods can be found

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affordable prices,

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which contributes to

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ample access by people,

in other words

, is much cheaper to purchase

this

type of product than natural and fresh

food

.

For instance

, famous companies

such

as

McDonalds

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are able to sell servings of French fries for popular prices which become the

first

option for some individuals who do not have much money.

Secondly

,

this sort

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of items

are

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much more convenient and faster to be consumed in compared with the

time

necessary to prepare a dish at home.

Therefore

, workers with a hectic routine would save

time consuming

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fast

food

instead

of preparing a natural and healthy meal. An example of

this

would be workers, who

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in a metropolitan city, without a work-life balance that would rather consume fast

food

to spare

time

.

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they save

time

but they endanger their

health

since the high consumption of sugar, fat and sodium can increase the number of diseases

such

as stroke, cancers and blood pressure disorders.

Subsequently

, the number of establishments with

this

type of

food

is ubiquitous. They can be easily traced not only in the majority of

centers

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but

also

at schools which leads to the high consumption by children, who should have a balanced and nutritional diet since they are in constant development.

For example

, some international research shows that children that intake fast

food

at school have more likelihood to be an obese adult. The more intake of processed foods, the worst the quality of

health

of these citizens. For these reasons, I strongly agree with the need of having strict laws and

fee

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to control

this

alarming situation. In conclusion, fast foods are popular among people of all ages due to cheap prices,

facility

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of preparing, and the number of stores

sells

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this

type of product. They can present some facilities but on other hand, they are tremendously harmful to

health

.

Therefore

, higher taxes imposed by governments should be priorities.