you and your family are living in a acommodation in English - speaking country. You ae satisfied with the condition of the furniture. Write a letter to landlord.

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Dear Helen, Hope you doing great. I am a tenant in one of your properties

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King Street. I am writing

this

letter to bring your

attendtion

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attention

to some of

substandard

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the substandard

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furniture as a part of the rental arrgentment. I am hoping you could fix or replace them with the new one.

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relation the

spetific

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specific

specifics

, I live in your apartment

last

four months.

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beginning

beggining

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, we

was

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extremly

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extremely

satisfied and happy when we moved

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into

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the apartment

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but

dissapointed

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disappointed

since we found some of

furniture

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the furniture

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was out of date and

torm

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torn

down.

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condition

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has

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noisy

sounds

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sound

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and water is leaking when we turn

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it on

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Also

, the

refrigator

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refrigerator

does not maintain

acturately

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accurate

accurately

temperature and

this

is the reason why our food turned bad

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quickly

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quicky

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. One more thing, the dinner table leg had some broken. Overall, the number of

stuffs

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stuff

kinds of stuff

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which had provided are in fauth conditions. I request you to look into

matter

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urgently. I recommend kindly arrange for the repair and

maintaince

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maintenance

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of those

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those furniture

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that furniture

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.I expect your action as

this

as soon as

posiable

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possible

as these of

problemcsare

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problems are

affecred

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affected

uiy king Sincerely, Diana th

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

189 words

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you and your family are living in a acommodation in English - speaking country. You ae satisfied with the condition of the furniture. Write a letter to landlord.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Failure is proof that desire wasn't strong enough. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympic is waste of money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many countries spend a lot of money on art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history about house or building they live in. What are reason for this? how can people research it?