You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, *describe the training course you want to do *explain what the company could do to help you *say how the course will be useful for your job
Hello MR. Osama I have seen an advertisement on the website , So I'm excited to have it and improve my skills.
I decided to take an
English
course a few months ago to improve my English
skills and also
I will be able to speak easily with the employees about those who speak English
, I used to speak with them by translation ,Moreover
, It was so exhausting to have a discussion about the job with them , Therefore
, If I took the course , I would make teamwork better than present.
In my opinion , you can make a decision about who deserves the course , However
, I know there are masses of employees who want to take it , I could say I have a passion for doing it and making the company better in the near future in additional I have many friends in the USA and England also
in New Zealand , I couldn't make them costumer unless I speak English
as native .
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon , Thank youSubmitted by osama.mezal7 on
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coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your ideas more clearly to enhance logical structure. Each paragraph should have a single main idea.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear transitions between sentences and paragraphs to improve cohesion.
task achievement
You addressed all parts of the task by describing the course, explaining what the company could do, and saying how it will be useful.
task achievement
The tone is appropriate for a letter to a manager, being both formal and polite.
coherence and cohesion
You began with a greeting and ended with a closing, which provides a nice structure to the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,