In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage?

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There is a predicted trend showing that man's means of transportation will be modernised to reduce the amount of time people spend driving
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. The drivers will not be compulsory in the driving process. In my opinion, to the extent, I think the cons
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its pros. My rationale for the disagreement primarily comes from the chance of accidents
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occur when the vehicles are processing
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self-driving mode. Deeply thinking, I believe that no matter how the A.I
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are intelligent, they still could not replace human's driving positions. They have already been mentioned by many scientists who say that robots still could not brainstorm on their own. Take a famous scientist in America
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, many years ago, he had done doing some researches about A.I' replacement in our daily life activities. He says
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that robots still have not had our human's brain
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, they still could not considerably be as smart as
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, there is
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a quite small benefit of
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improvement.
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from removing human's driving position, when people do not have to drive, they could enjoyably spend time doing
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, traffic jam in Thailand is a very difficult solving problem. If auto-driving cars are used in
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country, the citizen could reduce their time-consuming driving process, and be able to prepare things before reaching their destination. In conclusion, I argue that
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of self-driving
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outweigh the drawbacks. Contrarily, there are even more cons than pros. The consequences could be the increasing cases of car accidents on the roads, A.I driving
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' unaffordable prices for developing countries to purchase, etc. I suggest that there is still a long journey for
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to replicate our brain
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into robots.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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  • Congestion
  • Mobility
  • Cybersecurity
  • Ethical dilemmas
  • Human error
  • Fuel consumption
  • Environmental benefits
  • Initial deployment
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  • Enhanced technology
  • Independence
  • Quality of life
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