In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage?
There is a predicted trend showing that man's means of transportation will be modernised to reduce the amount of time people spend driving
everyday
. The drivers will not be compulsory in the driving process. In my opinion, to the extent, I think the cons Replace the word
every day
are considerably outweigh
its pros.
My rationale for the disagreement primarily comes from the chance of accidents Change the verb form
considerably outweigh
might
occur when the vehicles are processing Correct pronoun usage
that might
its
self-driving mode. Deeply thinking, I believe that no matter how the A.I Correct pronoun usage
their
systems
in every vehicles
are intelligent, they still could not replace human's driving positions. They have already been mentioned by many scientists who say that robots still could not brainstorm on their own. Take a famous scientist in America Change to a singular noun
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for example
, many years ago, he had done doing some researches about A.I' replacement in our daily life activities. He says on
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that robots still have not had our human's brain Add an article
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systems
; hence
, they still could not considerably be as smart as human
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.
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On the other hand
, there is also
a quite small benefit of this
improvement. Subsequently
from removing human's driving position, when people do not have to drive, they could enjoyably spend time doing activites
they prefer while on their way. Correct your spelling
activities
For example
, traffic jam in Thailand is a very difficult solving problem. If auto-driving cars are used in this
country, the citizen could reduce their time-consuming driving process, and be able to prepare things before reaching their destination.
In conclusion, I argue that benefits
of self-driving Correct article usage
the benefits
systems
outweigh the drawbacks. Contrarily, there are even more cons than pros. The consequences could be the increasing cases of car accidents on the roads, A.I driving systems
' unaffordable prices for developing countries to purchase, etc. I suggest that there is still a long journey for Add an article
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite