You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

NATIONS CONSISTS OF DIFFERENT SOCIETAL
CLASS
OF INDIVIDUALS AND MANY METHODOLOGIES HAVE BEEN PUT IN PLACE TO DRIVE IMPROVEMENT WITH THE LOWER
CLASS
. I WOULD EXPLAIN VARIOUS CONCEPTS AND ACTIONS RESPONSIBLE FOR
THIS
DIFFERENCE IN ECONOMIC STANDING WITHIN EVERY POPULATION IN A PARTICULAR HABITAT.
FIRST
OF ALL, DIFFERENT CLIMES HAVE PEOPLE CATEGORIZED BASED ON THEIR PERSONAL INCOME AND ECONOMIC WORTH AND MANY HAVE DEVELOPED STRATEGIES TO ENSURE EVEN SPREAD OF
RESOURCES
EVEN THOUGH A SUSTAINABLE STRUCTURE IS REQUIRED TO DELIVER
SUCH
RESULTS OTHERS HAVE BECOME COMPLACENT ON TAKING ACTIONS TO REDUCE THE POPULATION IN THE IMPOVERISHED
CLASS
.
ALTHOUGH
THERE ARE MANY FACTORS THAT CAN BE RESPONSIBLE FOR HAVING A DOMINANT NUMBER OF PEOPLE IN THE LOWER
CLASS
OF A SOCIETY THE CORE CHARACTERISTICS ARE LEVEL OF EDUCATION, AVAILABILITY OF
RESOURCES
, MANAGEMENT OF
RESOURCES
AND CULTURE. EDUCATION IS VERY KEY AS THE LEVEL OF EDUCATION FOR DEVELOPING COUNTRIES IS MAJORLY HIGH SCHOOL MANY GOVERNMENTS HAVING ESTABLISHED A GAP DUE TO
THIS
VARIABLE DEVELOPS MANY CITADELS OF KNOWLEDGE AND EXCHANGE PROGRAMS TO GROW THE HUMAN RESOURCE AND THEIR COUNTRY.
FURTHERMORE
IMPROVING AND SUSTAINING THE LEVEL OF PROSPERITY AND LEAP TO THE UPPER
CLASS
CAN BE FOSTERED BY TAKING FAVOURABLE ACTIONS IN THE FOLLOWING WAYS:
INITIALLY
INTRODUCING SMALL BUSINESS ENTERPRISES INVOLVING TRAINING AND LOAN SCHEMES.
ALSO
, ONE QUICK WAY IS TO INVOLVE THE IMPOVERISHED
CLASS
IN VOCATIONAL TRAINING.
FINALLY
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ALL
THIS
AND MANY MORE WOULD NOT BE COMPLETE IF THERE IS EXTORTION OF NATURAL
RESOURCES
AND EMBEZZLEMENT OF FUNDS
SO
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THE FORMATION OF USEFUL BODIES LIKE THE DESOPADEC IN NIGERIA OVERSEEING FLOW AND MANAGEMENT OF OIL
RESOURCES
IN A COUNTRY LIKE NIGERIA CAN BE INSTITUTED. IN CONCLUSION WITH THE RIGHT FOCUS AND DISTRIBUTION OF
RESOURCES
ADMINISTERED TO A HIGHER EDUCATED POPULACE THE GOVERNMENT WOULD UNARGUABLY HAVE SUPPORTED THE QUALITY OF THE SOCIAL CLASSIFICATION OF THEIR COUNTRY
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