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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, However believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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It's often said that
children
 would grow up to be a good person by the good environment at home, while there are many others who believe that school was an important society for them. I think that both ways have an impact on
children
.
To begin
 with, It is generally believed that
parents
 should educate
children
 on how to be
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good people in the community.
This
 is because some
children
 believe their
parents
 are more than teachers, there are many people said that
parents
 are the
first
 teachers.
For example
,
parents
 may teach their
children
 and guide them to be an honest person and educate them if they did something wrong and tell them the right way to do in the future. Family is the
first
 platform for them to provide basic learning and making their mind have a good attitude.
On the other hand
, many people believe that school is the most important time in
children
 life. School is the place where
children
 could teach skills on various subjects since they turn three years old. In
many
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,
children
 believe their teacher rather than their
parents
 and they choose to focus on what they teach. At
this
 age,
children
 open their minds and respect their teacher so they can learn how to be a good person in the classroom and may have an experience with the real situation with their friend and it will be the greatest lesson in their life. To conclude, I feel both
parents
 and teachers have their distinct roles in moulding
children
 into good citizens in society as they function in different environments.
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