Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Studying abroad has become popular among

students

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. A group of people believe that getting an education in a foreign

country

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has numerous advantages compared to their own nation. I totally agree with

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statement. In

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essay, I will discuss, why do I think it has myriad benefits.

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and foremost, for the career ,prospect it is beneficial. It is evident that those

students

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who go abroad for

further

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study

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get the opportunity to work in that

country

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or their own

country

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. For other

students

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who did not get an option to

study

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outside of their nation, they need a working visa or PR to do the job there.

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students

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get a chance to learn new technologies and hands-on experiments.

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, due to renowned university’s ,certificate they get a good salary package when they want to settle in their nation.

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, in ,research it is found that many Indians are applying for student’s visas compare to the

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two decades.

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, they

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with different cultural

students

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, they get a chance to learn about diverse cultures and traditions.

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, it would be helpful in social adjustment.

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, it would be easy for them to adjust to an international company and its environment.

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, employees get convenient to handle overseas clients due to a better understanding of diverse cultures.

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, if people are applying for immigration or permanent PR

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they get extra points if they studied in that

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. It becomes easy for them to settle there.

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, for Canada Permanent residence, people can get 200 extra points if they studied there for one year or more. In conclusion, few communities think that learning in other nations has immense benefits.

Students

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can get better career opportunities after

study

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, a good understanding of diverse cultures and easy to get express entry.

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