Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?
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while I would argue that these are Use synonyms
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essay, I will support the latter view with explanations and examples.
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but they could not accomplish much success and Use synonyms
also
are left with very minimal choices in their career.
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subjects
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life
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life
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, it is seen that a person who studied finance in Linking Words
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primary education has been able to work in different professions in the same industry, irrespective of having a degree in finance only.
In conclusion, I fail to agree that Correct article usage
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subjects
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other school curriculum
. There may be few extraordinary examples Change the wording
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other school curricula
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