Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniably true that higher secondary education is the building block of

life

. Some people believe that

art

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as important as other

subjects

while I would argue that these are

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unimportant in a child's future. In

this

essay, I will support the latter view with explanations and examples.

Firstly

,

art

studies in completely based on talent and

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scope

is

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limited.

This

is because

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these

subjects

require a lot of inbuilt talent and only

limited

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number of individuals achieve great success in these fields.

As a result

, children waste a lot of

time

in trying to achieve accomplishment

however

they fail drastically in doing so and

also

, are unable to choose any other field because of the prolonged

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.

This

creates a lot of mental trauma in the minds of many learners and gives a

life long

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depression in some cases.

For example

, there have been many people who attempted to become a superstar in the movie industry for a long

time

but they could not accomplish much success and

also

are left with very minimal choices in their career.

Secondly

, school

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curriculum

like maths, science and language helps children to choose from various

life

careers. The reason behind

this

is that these

subjects

are universally accepted and allows an individual to easily switch jobs at

anytime

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during their

life

.

Consequently

, one can be carefree with

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to financial difficulties in

life

as well as job security in the long run.

Furthermore

, one can spend

good

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time

with family and can live peaceful and less exhausting

life

.

For instance

, it is seen that a person who studied finance in

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primary education has been able to work in different professions in the same industry, irrespective of having a degree in finance only. In conclusion, I fail to agree that

art

subjects

are as important as

other school curriculum

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. There may be few extraordinary examples

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may encourage

art

studies

however

they are very few in number and do not apply to the bigger population. Important

subjects

such

as arithmetic and mathematics will always be uncomparably vital in one's career.