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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

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Since the old era, humans always
cook
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food
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 for a living. Even in the present
day
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, humans still
cook
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food
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 at home.
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, on
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day
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, there are lots of ready to eat
food
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 that they do not need to
cook
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 by themselves. But, cooking at home is still a preferred choice by many
people
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. And there are many
people
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 who choose ready to eat
food
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. The following paragraph will be discussing a reason, advantages and disadvantages for those who prefer ready-made
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 more than
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 at home.
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, the conclusion has been reached.
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 with, I personally understand those who prefer ready-made meals. In the present, many
people
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 have many urgent things to do in the
day
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. They cannot provide any time for cooking
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. And, ready-made
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 is easy for them to get
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 of cooking the
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. For
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food
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, they can grab it in a convenience store or get it from a
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.
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, there are varieties menu and a taste of it is very stable not like cooking by themselves that they need to have a recipe or adjust the flavour by themselves.
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,
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 kind of
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also
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 provide disadvantages,
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 as if they grab
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food
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 from the convenience store, they usually are a frozen
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 which consists of high sodium that affects the body in many ways
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 or grabs from the
restaurant
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 the price is quite too high for many
people
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 to get it every
day
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.
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, if they grab it from the store or
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, they cannot adjust the taste of the
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, or in the case of
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 who have diabetes who needs to care about their meal might not favour
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food
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. In summary, a ready-made meal provides many advantages and disadvantages. But I do believe that we should know how to
cook
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 because if we meet a bad situation or the convenient and the
restaurant
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 is closed, we might need to
cook
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 the meal by ourselves.
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