International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

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In the global integration period, tourism plays a vital role in the economic development of
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. The prices of international travel are cheaper so that more and more
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have opportunities to visit beautiful sightseeings. In my opinion,
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situation brings both positive and negative effects and my reasons will be explained in the
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paragraphs. On the one hand, the increase in the number of
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has several advantages to a country.
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, tourism leads to increased income as well as the quality of life of the citizens there. More people coming to visit means there are more job opportunities for the inhabitants because of the increasing demand for services
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as entertainment, food and accommodations.
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, the residents have more money to afford more quality lives.
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, the national economic development is caused by the investment of international companies in the local areas. Especially the developing
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which are positively welcoming investors, so that,
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, the investments of infrastructures
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as hospitals, schools, roads increase.
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means that the living standards of people rise.
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, the enormous number of
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is the reason for the environmental problems of many
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. Many landmarks and historical relics are gradually losing their value and beauty because of the ignorance of visitors, residents and local authorities. Society's awareness, as well as the management of authorities, are not good enough to keep their scenes surviving over time until those issues really alarm.
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, some places do not have strict discipline on littering and the waste treatment problem is very complex to handle.
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, Sam Son beach, a famous Vietnamese tourist destination. In the beginning,
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place was famous for the blue water and smooth yellow sand. But now, it is known as one of the dirtiest beaches in Vietnam which are faced with criticism from environmental protection organizations. In conclusion,
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the advantages of international tourism to
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can not be denied, problems brought to the environment by opening their doors to
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are
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serious. Anyway, the government should balance economic development and environmental protection.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • local businesses
  • job creation
  • cultural understanding
  • stereotypes
  • global connections
  • infrastructure
  • public transportation
  • environmental degradation
  • pollution
  • deforestation
  • wildlife habitats
  • commercialization
  • cultural identity
  • overcrowding
  • quality of life
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