In recent years, pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, in modern life, by the development of society, people are required to have higher academic and experiences than the same level of career in the past.
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hard from an early age so that they can meet those requirements. In my opinion, Use synonyms
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development brings both negative and positive effects and my reasons will be explained in the Linking Words
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On the one hand, working harder has several advantages. Linking Words
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such
as risks of firing jobs and dangerous working environments, which might adversely affect their mental Linking Words
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students
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pressure
have a chance to practise and prepare for a better future. Use synonyms
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a plus point in job records that companies prioritize for their recruitments. Linking Words
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advantage can be expressed through the Linking Words
students
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pressure
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students
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health
. At a growing age, the student has not fully developed awareness and is not strong enough to solve all the Use synonyms
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In conclusion, working hard making Use synonyms
students
have more opportunities in their future careers can be denied, but it should be balanced between expectations of their Use synonyms
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