Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

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are facing in many country's.
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the trees can be the causes of global warming. in
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will elaborate more about
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polution
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and the population is increasing
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much for all the countries.
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polution
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main
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reason to increase the global warming and life is very busy in the metro city and more
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are coming for
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a job in
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city. Because of that new cars or bikes are coming to the market for
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transportation. from the
vichale
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visible

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coming
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polution
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pollution

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is effected the
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instance
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is become
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the most
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city in
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. because of the usage of
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cars and other transportation.
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, because of increasing the population
people
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are constructing
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are vanish
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all the forest and
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g the trees and building the house and factories which is effecting more the
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and getting more
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of the humans.
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hand
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the authority should take some
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action to control the
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the
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good health. Government should start the odd and even law to drive or take the car on the roads so
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cars will be coming on the roads
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can do car pulling which will help them to save time and money and can
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metro
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to save the
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should relocate all the industries to
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area so that it should not
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effect
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and
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health. To illustrate more
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of the worst
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punjab
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more cancer patients are
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globel
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worming
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face by all the nations.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global issue
  • severity
  • urgency
  • greenhouse effect
  • human-induced
  • deforestation
  • fossil fuel combustion
  • industrial pollution
  • environmental regulations
  • emission standards
  • renewable energy sources
  • green technologies
  • international cooperation
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • energy consumption
  • public transportation
  • recycling
  • eco-friendly
  • extreme weather conditions
  • biodiversity
  • economic stability
  • collective responsibility
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