Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.others, however,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different arguments with regard to having a fixed for flexible punishments for

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. I agree with those who think the situation of a criminal should be taken into account to impose a right verdict . In the

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place, there are some who claim to

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a fixed punishment to deter from breaking the law. They think that if there were strict penalties for breaklawers, no one would dare to commit a

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way we would have a safer society.

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, kidnapping is not right in any condition.For

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kind of

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, there should be an unchangeable verdict to stop these

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.

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, they think that even for minor

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as high-speed driving, there should be a great fine. In

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way, individuals would obey the driving laws much more, if they had to pay a great

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of fines.

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, I believe that there are some situations in which people have to commit a

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it is not legal. If a person children have a serious disorder

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as cancer which requires a high amount of money to spend on its treatment,

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person will be forced to find a way to pay the costs of it. So, it would be possible that those who suffer from the same situation become thieves or burglars.If

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of helping them and prepare them

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to jail, they will become even worse when they become free again.

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, for

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minor crimes

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there should not be a jail sentence as if minor

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have an experience of encountering other criminals, they will be influenced negatively by them.

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, governments should consider some rehabilitation courses for them to inform them about the disadvantages of

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. There are indeed some

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that are done for self-defence or unintentional. There are several incidences of

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when victims might kill the rapers. In

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time, everyone might do the same and

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of ,punishments these vulnerable individuals should receive some emotional support from either society and government. In conclusion,

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there are some who think that there must be unchangeable penalties for each type of

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, I think that the condition and desire of

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should be considered

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before imposing a sentence for them.