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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some
people
 believe That modern communication
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 or longest letters. There are two facts.
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 as formal and informal.
Firstly
, formal – accepted by other
people
.
Secondly
 informal – we
use
 it in nowadays save time. In my point of view formal
way
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 informal. To
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begin
 with formal we usually
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way
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, attending universities.
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, some students made
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foreigner
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university
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.
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letter
 and has
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 limits.
Secondly
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new students need to
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 an invitation
letter
 with more details and information about themselves.
Thirdly
 some
people
 may
use
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. And Government established patterns of letters it made
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way
 to reach
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.
However
, informal
way
 we have usage. Short letters or messages save our time. And
people
use
 it between
unbusnesses
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businesses
 deals.
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 pattern.
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 as name and topic. To consum. When we write
longer
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letter
 that we
use
 for businesses formal communication that require more statements.
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use
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 between friends and informal deals.
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