In some countries around the world, men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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the growth in technology, education and other sectors, some nations around the world recorded a gradual decrease in the number of
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and having the
first
child
between 20-30 aged. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the reasons behind having babies late in
life
, and how the negatives outweigh the positives.
To begin
with, nowadays males and females are facing many obstacles,
life
has become increasingly difficult. In the past
life
was simple.
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university, you will find a job easily, build a house or rent it
thus
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run a family, and feed your
child
.
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, the products from supermarkets and pharmacies were
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cheep
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and easy to get. Meanwhile, requirements of
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life
have changed. People
such
as
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doctors, engineers and mechanics cannot find
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appropriate job easier than past, even if they are smart and capable, because the proportion of individuals rose dramatically.
In addition
, the cost of the goods
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expensive. A study
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comparing the price of the products in the past and present showed that markets witnessed a double increase.
As a result
, women and men
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to give birth to
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a child
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.
On the other hand
, I think giving birth
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a
child
late will cause many problems.
First
, if the person
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married late, he will not have enough time to
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with his/her children.
For instance
, my aunt got pregnant when she was 40, while her
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daughter
now
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complete 5 years old, she is 45 years old. And she is very sad and nervous because she cannot treat her daughter as
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and cannot play with
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. It
called
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( different age problem)
Second
, being
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pregnant
in
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late age will lead to medical problems. The
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will not be able to take care of
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children as 20 years pregnant. To summarise, the disadvantages of
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married late are obvious, so governments should be aware of its effects. They can establish foundations or
chiraties
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charities
that will assist people who could not have enough money.
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