Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
A recent survey shows that 50% of
people
have same
choice of outfits. Certain Change the article
the same
people
believe that a person’s
culture
and character
can be completely judged based on their dressing sence
. I disagree with Correct your spelling
sense
this
statement. This
essay shall examine it in detail. To begin
with, in recent times most people
wear clothes that are very identical. For example
, most of the schools and colleges in India instruct their students to wear uniforms. So we cannot identify a person’s
culture
based on their clothing style. Next,
the character
of a person cannot be proven good based on the way they dress. For instance
, when I met with an accident few
years back most Change the article
a few
well- dressed
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well-dressed
people
hesitated to offer help, but a cab driver saved me by taking me to the hospital. Character
and Correct article usage
The character
culture
of an individual can be interpreted by the way one reacts to certain situation
. We Fix the agreement mistake
situations
cannothide
our bad Correct your spelling
cannot hide
character
under our clothes. On the other hand
, we can hardly evaluate a person’s
culture
and character
based on their dress. It influences the results up to certain
extent only. Correct article usage
a certain
For instance
, only somethings
can be defined Correct your spelling
some things
basedon
how well one presents themselves. Correct your spelling
based on
Firstly
, only few
basic Change the article
a few
quality
about a person can be understood with which a lot can be improvised Fix the agreement mistake
qualities
about
Change preposition
apply
them
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Secondly
, by doing so most of time
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the time
people
tend to understand a person in a wrong manner. Even though first impression is important it does not have to be completely true. To summarise, evaluating a person’s
nature based on the way they dress does not give a lot of information, but just common
understanding about them which may or may not be true.Correct article usage
a common
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