Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages in living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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Many people
likes
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more living in an
apartment
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while others prefer to live in a
house
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.
Althought
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there are some differences between each type of living there are
resons
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reasons
,
advantages
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and disadvantages of each.
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, why there are some people
how
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now
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prefer
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living in a
house
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whereas others see
advantages
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living in an
appartment
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apartment
. In
this
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material will be discussed what are the differences of each, living in
an
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residence and an
appartment
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apartment
. The
advantages
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of living in a home are clear, you have your own land, it might be larger than an
apartment
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if comparing the price of each other.
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,
the
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in the
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apartment
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you have more security
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it might be smaller than a residence.
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, comparing a
house
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with an
apartment
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, you will be able to design and
contruct
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construct
contract
as you like but in an
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apartment
appartment
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you
wont
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won't
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worry if your children
be
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are
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at the
buiding
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building
playground.
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both of them are residences they have their particularities.
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, living in a
house
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have some bad sides.
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,
although
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someone
who
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has all of the freedom of someone who lives in an
apartment
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, the person who lives in a
house
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has the concern of being robbed or invaded, spending more money
in
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on
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security
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the security
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system.
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, those who live in apartments need to have a friendly approach with their neighbours since they are wall-to-wall. A good example of a
disavantage
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disadvantage
of living in an
apartment
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is having a broken pipe where in many cases can leak water through neighbour walls,
depending
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the damage the
apartment
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owner that caused the leak will have to pay for the neighbour damages.
Although
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there are
advantages
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and
disadivantages
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disadvantages
of living in a home and
apartment
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, every person has their own particularities based on their experience,
thus
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, like
this
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chosen
a
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apply
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house
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or
apartment
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will be based on their taste. In conclusion, there are no
advantages
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and disadvantages when it is
contratest
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contrast
with different people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • outdoor activities
  • gardening
  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
  • security features
  • gated entries
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