Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

An increase in the number of

immigrants

in various countries raised the question that whether newcomers should absorb the local culture and discard their former

customs

. Personally, I intend to argue that, the absorption of

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country’s rules is inevitable for

immigrants

.

People

who are new to a place can blend in with society better if they follow their codes of conduct, particularly the ones that are reflected in society.

That is

,

immigrants

are bound to be accepted in a community if they do not offend or insult the citizens unwillingly. Take newcomers to Muslim countries as a blatantly obvious example; the dress code, which is strict for women, must be abided by

immigrants

in order to be a part of society when wearing a

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is by no means optional for women. Some

people

,

however

, are of the opinion that the

customs

and

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which are not showcased in the public could be preserved. In the United States, various ceremonies are held by Persian expatriates related to their culture without harassment and insulting local

people

,

such

as the Persian new year ceremony. Despite conserving some

customs

and cultures that are not offensive, the codes of

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of the host country should be followed even inside the families. Regarding

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children’s

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in developed countries, patriarchy must be discarded in the conservative

immigrants

’ families, since children have the right to sue their parents . By way of conclusion, granted, a few personal habits of a nation can be kept,

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the majority of laws and

customs

are impossible to overlook and should be followed. Before moving to another country

people

would better raise their awareness with regard to their destination country to avoid culture shock, especially when it comes to bringing up children.