Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packing are bad for the environment. What damage does do the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

Nowadays, Due to modern technologies,
plastic
is widely used in every industry in the world.
Therefore
, anything created by plastics like bags, bottles and packings can harm our mother earth.
This
essay will discuss the damage and the solution to the problem of
plastic
to the
environment
that will reach an appropriate conclusion. Admittedly, due to
modernized
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technology of the world, our
environment
suffered from it. The
environment
will suffer from air pollution and flooding. Mostly, factories using plastics for production will
cause
bad pollution, from the
waste
of raw materials to the finished products.They think
plastic
can give more durable and handy to the consumer when they used it but it will give bad outcomes.
For example
, in the Philippines, mostly the factories are near rivers, due to a lack of
waste
management, the
waste
is directly poured out of the river
instead
proper
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drainage,
this
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which
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will
cause
the river polluted. One more thing,the improper
waste
of
plastic
product
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products
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. Many factories don’t have the right sewerage treatment for their finished product
waste
.
Moreover
, they just release it anywhere like river, ocean, empty landed or anywhere that can pull out their garbage,
this
will
cause
flooding when times of the raining season.
For example
, over a year the rate of people consuming water
plastic
bottles raise higher than before and the bottles
is
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just dumping into
trash
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a trash
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can or in a lake or ocean.
On the other hand
, the government and people should be united to solve the problem in the
environment
.
First
, the Government should
alot
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a lot
funding
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fund
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for their research, laws and programs like giving awareness to people on how to
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dispose
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disposed
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there
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their
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waste
properly. Segregate the
waste
that can recycle like plastics and paper. To research what
need
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needs
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to do on recycling wastes. Giving knowledge on the law
that is
enforced to the community regarding
waste
. For the individuals, they need to follow the programs and laws that the government imposed on them, as simple as that to make
an abiding citizens
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abiding citizens
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.
For example
, Singapore, they have
a
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apply
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proper recycling for their
waste
and there have proper planning on the establishment for proper
waste
. In conclusion, anything that can
cause
the
environment
to damage must need to do a solution is able to make the community or the country worth living.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • wildlife
  • marine life
  • decompose
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • fossil fuels
  • waterways
  • flooding
  • soil
  • groundwater
  • government regulations
  • single-use plastics
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • plastic consumption
  • recycle
  • dispose of
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