Buying things on the internet, such as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, purchasing things on the online channel, including books, air

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and groceries is becoming more popular. In my opinion, the benefits of shopping online outweigh its disadvantages. In the following paragraphs, I will give reasons to support my view. On the one hand, there are two main advantages of ordering items through

e-commerce

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an e-commerce

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platform.

Firstly

, it is comfortable for both buyers and sellers because they can make

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payment easier and faster. Whereas

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traditional shopping requires clients to pay at the shop,

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online shopping does not require any

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effort

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.

Customer

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The customer

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just clicks the button ,and

then

the process will take only a

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.

For example

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an individual

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individuals

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can order new books from Amazon.com by using

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credit card

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one click.

Therefore

, utilizing

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platform is reducing

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to make a payment.

Secondly

, it helps people to compare price and quality better than

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past.

For instantly

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, customers can open

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the website

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and get the information before making a decision.

Furthermore

, several platforms provided comparing functions to improve customer experience.

On the other hand

, making online transaction

also

has some drawbacks, which are fraud

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transactions

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and

scam

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scams

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. Some victims who have less knowledge about the internet cannot distinguish which merchants are reliable.

As a result

, they

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transferred

money to the shop, but they did not get stuff.

For example

, recently, some teenagers purchased new mobile by chatting to the merchant via Instagram.

Although

they

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transferred

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money, they did not receive any phone. Because

this

shop was

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a fraud

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.

However

,

this

issue could be prevented by educating people about cyber security. In conclusion, purchasing things via the internet have both benefits and drawbacks.

Nevertheless

, people gain more benefits than disadvantages. As it made

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more

convinient

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convenient

and easier, while it could prevent disadvantages by giving more information to users.