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Some students prefer classes with frequent discussions between the professor and the students with almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with many lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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, few pupils like a discussion on different academic
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 while some
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 do not like a debate on curriculum
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 and they just want straightforward lectures .
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, I prefer both and I
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 outline my view with a specific cause and some examples.
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, discussion on any
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 is helpful in memorization and unforgettable as well as
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 and trainee both have a focus on a topic because they not get caught. Sometimes children forget the actual answers but when they start to remember and get the answer easily.
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,while debating
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 get more ideas about
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 because all kids have different minds and various questions and answers,
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 as scientist Einstein who had a strange mindset compared to others,
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 he helped a lot to find the new law of gravity.
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, a discussion is
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 improved
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 skills like speaking in front of people, removing their fear and speaking easily
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 placing their views. It gives confidence to a child at a small age .
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, one Gujarati girl speak in front of a huge audience and got a prize as well as got popularity in the nation.
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,having straightforward lectures does not help in the enhancement of
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' ability because the teacher taught
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 without asking any questions and completed his/her
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. in conclusion, debating
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 is more beneficial for
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 because student and mentor both involved same and be more conscious about a topic.
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 with the debate is a good solution for our young ones.
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