Dear Mr Singh,
I am writing to request
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that you
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extend my home agreement for another six months.
I am Rupinder Kaur, who lives in apartment number 250 on the first floor of the Brar building. I have been living here for the Wrong verb form
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Since I work for a local company, my contract has been extended. Linking Words
Thus
, I prefer to live in the flat as it is situated near my workplace and the shopping centre. Linking Words
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, I have already bought essential things, Linking Words
such
as a bed, a sofa, and a couple of chairs, so it is quite difficult for me to move to another place.
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However
, I nowadays face a problem dueto afaulty heater system. As winter is approaching, it takes ages to warm up my rooms. Could you send a mechanicLinking Words
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so that the heater system can start working as soon as possiblePunctuation problem
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I am looking forward to your positive consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Rupinder KaurChange the punctuation
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