Five months ago, you started renting an apartment on a six-month agreement. You now wish to stay in the apartment for longer than the six months you originally agreed with the owner. Write a letter to the owner of your apartment. In your letter, say how long you now want to rent the apartment for explain why your plans have changed tell the owner about a problem in the apartment

Dear Mr Singh, I am writing to request
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extend my home agreement for another six months. I am Rupinder Kaur, who lives in apartment number 250 on the first floor of the Brar building. I have been living here for the
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5-months. Since I work for a local company, my contract has been extended.
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, I prefer to live in the flat as it is situated near my workplace and the shopping centre.
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, I have already bought essential things,
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as a bed, a sofa, and a couple of chairs, so it is quite difficult for me to move to another place.
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, I nowadays face a problem dueto afaulty heater system. As winter is approaching, it takes ages to warm up my rooms. Could you send a mechanic
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so that the heater system can start working as soon as possible
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I am looking forward to your positive consideration. Yours sincerely, Rupinder Kaur

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Task response: You answer all parts, but some ideas can be more clear and exact.
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Task response: Say the time you want more clearly, like 'for one more year' or 'for another six months'.
coherence cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Your letter is easy to follow, but some linking words can be better used.
coherence cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Check small form errors like 'due to a faulty' and '5 months' to make the text more smooth.
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Task response: You cover all three points in the task.
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Task response: The tone is polite and right for a letter to the owner.
coherence cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear opening, body, and ending.
coherence cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph has one main idea.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • lease extension
  • rent renewal
  • tenancy agreement
  • extend contract
  • residential term
  • currently residing
  • plan adjustment
  • maintenance issue
  • residential upkeep
  • repair request
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