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Some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing and martial arts should be banned from TV as Well as from international sports competition.what is your opinion ?

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Since the ancient period, humans have always found some things to entertain their life.
For example
, there are many types of
sports
 in
this
 world, and different kinds of
sports
 have their unique method to play, including the
sports
 that we need to fight each other or violence. Some enjoy
this
type
 of
sport
 and
people
 who are against it.
However
, some say that
this
 kind of
sport
 should be forbidden from TV. The following paragraph will be discussing my perspective.
Therefore
, the conclusion has been reached.
To begin
 with,
personally
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 I disagree that we should ban
this
type
 of
sport
 because I do believe that all of the
sports
 have their disadvantages, and some are worse than
this
type
 of
sport
. So, it does not make sense that
this
type
 of
sport
 is the only one that has been banned,
also
this
type
 of
sport
 reflects how old
people
 live and cultures in the past, which we need to retain for the
next
 coming generation to learn it.
Moreover
,
instead
 of banning, we should adjust until it fit the standard of the society, and
this
 kind of
sport
 provides benefits for
people
 who learn it,
such
 as boxing that in training
this
type
 of
sport
 aims to make
people
 have more tolerant than before and it very useful, if they get into a bad situation. In summary, from the former and latter paragraphs. I believe all of the reasons are enough for the
sport
 to not get banned from TV or from international competition.
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