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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, while some international
languages
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 are more and more popular all over the world, some others being spoken by fewer
people
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 are on the verge of extinction.
People
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 have different views about whether governments’ funding used for saving these
languages
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 is necessary or a waste of
money
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. In my opinion, I strongly support that those
languages
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 should be protected and my reason will be explained in the
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 paragraph. On the one hand, some
people
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 believe that it is unnecessary to waste a huge amount of
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 to save
languages
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 that are not used.
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 of investment for
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, education as well as public campaigns to increase
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's awareness,
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money
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 should be spent on other important sectors
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 as improving education infrastructures or healthcare service facilities, equipment, and human resources.
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,
people
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 are interested in international
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 as English, Chinese because of globalization.
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, many multinational companies’ requirements prioritize
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 who can speak English fluently. Taking time to learn another
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 makes
people
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 have fewer chances to learn those endangered
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.
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, saving
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 that are in danger of extinction is
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 saving the cultures which are on the verge of extinction. Each
language
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 represents a culture, if a
language
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 disappears, that culture will gradually fade over time. For archaeologists,
languages
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 are used to translate, exploit ancient documents and relics.
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, the ancient Egyptian
language
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 has disappeared, which makes researchers find many difficulties in the process of studying pyramids and remaining monuments.
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, by spending
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 on preserving
languages
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 that are less widely spoken, governments can
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 protect traditions, customs and lifestyles that are part of cultural heritage. In conclusion, saving endangered
languages
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 might be a controversial topic. In my personal opinion, it is necessary that the government should fund
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 issue to protect the diversity of cultures.
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