Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Environmental
issues
are a popular debatable topic nowadays. A set of folks say that extinction of certain species of plants and animals are the major problem of the environment
although
, a few others opine
this
and add that there are more other environmental
issues
also
. In my viewpoint, all environmental
issues
should address equally importantly.
Firstly
, the extinction of certain species of plants and animals are occurring due to changes in their habitat. Due to
this
, there will be an imbalance in the ecosystem and the ultimate sufferers are the humans.
On the other hand
, human beings are the only responsible factors for
this
extinction of species.
For example
, deforestation and catching fish continuously. Because of
this
, there will be global warming and cloud bursts.
However
,
this
may affect the health of the people negatively.
Secondly
, other natural calamities like landslides, floods and earthquakes are
also
affecting the environment badly. The main reason for these calamities is the illegal digging of sands from the rivers, pollution from vehicles and so on. So, directly or indirectly all these problems harm the environment and
this
may cause many health
issues
to humans. To summarize, human beings hurt nature for selfish graining without knowing that,
this
may affect them in the future negatively.
For example
, the recent floods that happened in one of the states of India remain the population about the extreme anger of nature.
Finally
, environmental
issues
are increasing day by day because of human behaviour. Due to
this
, in my opinion, all the environmental problems should address in the proper manner by giving equal importance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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