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Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statment? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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The Earth has been developed for centuries, especially the latest century which provides many innovations that can shake the whole world. While there are those
people
 who claim that the quality of life nowadays is better than 100 years ago, I totally agree with
this
 because
technology
 has enhanced everything better
such
 as communication and healthcare. In
this
 modern age,
people
 use high
technology
 in daily life because it can bring an advantage to
people
 like communication. In the past,
for example
, folks had written letters for messaging to others far from distance, whilst nowadays
people
 just use computers or smartphones to message to them, allowing the population to interact with each other suddenly and seamlessly.
This
 is just an example which
technology
 can do because there are many things that
people
 in the past could not imagine. In 2021, which passed millennium 21 years ago, public transportation has become a crucial part of the city. It can go across the country to carry passengers to their destiny.
For example
, Shinkansen, a famous high-speed rail in Japan, is used by either employees and tourists for travelling.
This
 leads civilized to the city and it can reduce the usage of the car, resulting in conserving energy unexpectedly. Thes have bolstered that
people
 nowadays have many approaches for travelling. If we compare in the past that those
people
 just use traditional trains or a car to go to their destiny. To conclude,
people
 in
this
 year have a far better life than folks in the
last
 century because scientists create innovations and
technology
 that can apply in many objectives, and one of them provides convenience to every
people
 on the planet.
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