More and more people want to buy famous brands in clothes cars and other items . What are the reasons behind this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In our present universe, luxury
items
reflect one’s status level in a community. Several individuals purchase branded
items
in clothing, vehicles or others. I strongly believe it’s a negative notion as
such
influence on
people
could divert them from education and discourage unwanted spending. On the one side, the most significant reason for using branded products allows one to express his/her social status and prosperity which allow them to show off and demand respect off it. In our modern world,
people
value materialistic
items
such
as watches or phones which makes them distinct and different from the rest of the world.
For example
, iPhones are considered a symbol of social status and because of
this
most celebrities in the world, use Apple phones are their primary daily driver as compared to other brands.
Therefore
, give a sense of worthiness and confidence without actually saying it out loud. On the other side,
such
a trend develops a negative effect. The primary reason illustrates the unwanted spending and illegal means of acquiring it.
This
could
further
attenuate young minds to purchase expensive commodities more than they could afford and
this
could lead to committing illegal acts in order to earn extra cash.
For instance
, in China, a teenager was enticed to sell his kidney to an illegal organ trafficker to acquire a lump sum of the amount to purchase the latest iPhone.
Thus
clouding
people
to commit unwanted offences to buy expensive things. In conclusion, I feel costly
items
don’t value one’s morals and character, it makes them more shallow and selfish.
People
need to
be educate
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themselves to be better versions than their former
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and prevent them from being under the influence of
such
useless trends.
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