A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

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Dear Sarah, I hope
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letter finds you in good health. I
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want to thank you for trusting me with
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an important decision. So, here is what I have to say in response to your queries about the Corporate Communications course at Ryerson
University
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. I understand that you
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want to pursue a master's degree in Public Relations from the same
university
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. I must tell you,
this
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course is very
fast paced
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combined with both theory and
practise
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. You will learn how to write press releases, work with the media and
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get mentored by highly experienced professors.
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, the
university
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is so organized, has world-class infrastructure and
access
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to the best public relations libraries available. The institution really cares about their students so they
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offer tutors if needed. I really recommend you the
university
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. So, just visit the
university
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website at www.ryersonuni.com to learn about how to apply online, or just call the number of
administration
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office to ask him/her to send you the admission form and other necessary documents, if you want to proceed
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. I hope you find
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useful. Do not hesitate to contact me again. Warm wishes, Nav
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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