Nowadays education quality is very low. Some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both sides and give yout opinion.

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It is argued that who is responsible for poor education and result of

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. One part of society

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that

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need to encourage to misbehave with their teachers and try to

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evaluate

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able to

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teachers

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to analyze their skills

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not good.

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well in their exams or studies

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some parents say that

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do not have enough skills to teach their children.

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even parents suggest their child

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to examine the level of teaching of that teachers.

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study hard for it, but his parents say that

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skills to teach the children. On the Other side, some experts say,

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kind of manners and blaming will not help

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the

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they demolish the discipline of the classroom and may reduce their respect in front of

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. Some

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are not able to perform

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or the

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or may punish the

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that they are not good and that demolish the image of the

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OF ABU loss it reputation after protesting of

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parent regarding the result of their

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children

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along with their friends and family make a

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or university and even get

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reputation

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surrounding

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

399 words

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