Nowadays education quality is very low. Some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both sides and give yout opinion.

It is argued that who is responsible for poor education and result of
students
. One part of society
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that
students
need to encourage to misbehave with their teachers and try to
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evaluate
their skill of teaching. While others say that it will not
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beneficial
to pupils,
this
is not good for their reputation and the environment of the class.
However
, people have
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cursed
about it and
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able to
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decide
which one is right. I intend to explain it and draw my own opinion on it.
First
of all, misbehaviour with
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the teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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and
try
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to analyze their skills
is
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not good.
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, If
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a student
the student
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student
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students
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who not
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well in their exams or studies
than
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some parents say that
this
is all
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happened
happen
happens
due to the tutor only. They think that those
teacher
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do not have enough skills to teach their children.
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even parents suggest their child
to
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be rude
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their
teacher
and do complain of them to
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to examine the level of teaching of that teachers.
For instance
, In the USA, one
student
gets failed
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exam
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the exam
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because he
not
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does not
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study hard for it, but his parents say that
this
all
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due to
teacher
, they do not have that
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skills to teach the children. On the Other side, some experts say,
this
kind of manners and blaming will not help
to
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the
student
. After doing
this
they demolish the discipline of the classroom and may reduce their respect in front of
school
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the school
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. Some
students
are not able to perform
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because they are not that
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fast to capture or grab it, even
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they
not
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try hard for that. After
that
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if the
student
or the
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guardian
try to put the
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blam
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blame
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on them
then
may they
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instigate
restate
the
student
or may punish the
student
. Some time due to that
school
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that they are not good and that demolish the image of the
school
.
For example
, in Europe,
SCHOOL
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students
parent regarding the result of their
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children
. In conclusion,
students
along with their friends and family make a
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nonsense
nuisance
in
school
or university and even get
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encourage
encouraged
to do that sometime.As per my
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this
is not good and due to
that
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that student
those students
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students
or
school
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,school
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may
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reputaion
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reputation
as well as the
surounding
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surrounding
environment of study
also
get disturbed.
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