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Schools have limited amount of money to spend.some people suggest that it should be sent on good teachers, while others say it should be spent for buying equipment like computers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is very truly said that school is the best
teachers
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 for students. Some people argue that the funds need to spend on
teachers
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 while others say it should be used to buy equipment like
Computers
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. It is necessary to discuss both scenarios. According to my opinion, today is the generation of
Technology
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 so student needs items like
computers
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 more nowadays.
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, it is very much necessary to have good
teachers
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 in school as they are the backbone to teach young children.
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, a child of 5 years cannot understand the language of the system but he requires a teacher which can teach him/her basic language to speak and learn.
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, we can now see that we are living in a generation of 21st century and it is known to be the generation of
technology
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 and
technology
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 has become an important part of life. Nowadays children are being taught different languages like Java, C, Cloud computing which can only be learned through these tools. According to
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, It is
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 equally important to have
teachers
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 in schools but we need to focus more on equipment like a computer .We can see that now most of the schools and colleges have smart classes in which small children learn without the guidance of
teachers
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. Havings
computers
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 in school will help students to learn different languages.
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, they can have practical knowledge too in various fields which will help them in their careers and we all know we have more than 70 per cent of jobs in the computer field. Suppose a child is learning java language and he cannot compile or run that program anywhere else other than a computer.
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,
this
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 is the reason why it is necessary to have these items in schools. I would like to conclude by saying that
Teachers
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 too plays a key role but after looking at the takeover
technology
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 has taken over
everyone
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 of us, it is required that we need to focus more on tools like
computers
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.

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