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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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In today's world,
people
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 believe that we have a
lot
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 of different
options
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 to choose from. In my opinion, I agree with the statement. Today, with advancements in technology and globalisation, a number of
options
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 are available for everything.
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 is a good thing that we get a
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 of
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 to choose from to buy something that suits
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's budget and needs.
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,
people
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 spend a
lot
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 of time while evaluating different
options
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 and settling on
one
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. On the
one
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 hand, having different
options
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 to choose from for a product is beneficial as
one
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 can buy things that suits them. Today, whatever we want to buy be it clothes, houses, cars, bikes etc all come with different variations
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, making a number of
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 available.
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, a few days back I was looking to buy a new laptop and I was very specific about my requirements and specifications. I was surprised to see the number of laptops that were available and I was able to buy the best laptop that was in my budget and had those specific configurations.
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, having a
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 of
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 can turn out to be a bad option. Many
people
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 can not make
choices
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 from the different
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 available and
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 resulting in them wasting a
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 of time.
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, whenever I go out with my mother to buy clothes or anything, we keep on going from
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 shop to another and in the end, we buy only
one
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 or two shirts while wasting around 3 to 4 hours.
This
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 is very common among
people
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 these days.
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, with so many
choices
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 available out there,
one
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 should do thorough research and analysis while purchasing products and be aware of the scammers and protect themselves from buying duplicate goods. To conclude, I think having different
choices
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 for everything have been beneficial for me.
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 I always do thorough research and analysis before buying anything and I always advise others to do so.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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