You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

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Dear Tsui, I hope you find

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letter in the pink of your health.

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time, when we met I did inform you that I will be attending the Carnival festival

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Merdian Island. I did actually go there and I should tell you that it was a wonderful experience. There were a plethora of people from all walks of life. Different

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from various parts of the world, huge rides and vibrant events were hosted. I certainly think that you would love to explore

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. As It completely aligns to your taste and

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. The talent you

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posses

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in organizing an event is something, which you can portray here and you would totally ace at it.

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you could taste various

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of different lands

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festival.

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would

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help you to revive from the loneliness you feel here. The

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carnival will be held two months from now. I would love to invite you to come and join me

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so that we could go together and have

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time together. I will enclose the ticket to the festival via email to you. Keep me posted with the updates on it and write

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soon. Regards Neethu Babu

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

202 words

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