These days many people do little or no exercise at all, and they have health problems as a result. Why don’t many people get enough exercise? What can be done about it?

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Lack of
exercises
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has led to many health issues in
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recent times.
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is mainly due to the extremely busy lifestyle and cramped living conditions that
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people
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to lead a sedentary
life
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. There are many reasons why
people
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these days have a passive
life
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. The major reason is that
people
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do not get enough time after their work
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. Most of the working class face tight
competitions
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and have to achieve targets in order to sustain their professional
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due to which they end up working extra
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. After which, most of them are drained of energy to do any exercises.
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, an average person spends at least two
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of their day on the roads committing to offices.
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results in
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reduction of their time.
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, In Dubai, a person who works eight
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a day spends at least two
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in the traffic.
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to that, most of the
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live in cramped apartments. Thereby, resulting in
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of space for any outdoor activities. If
people
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had access to
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balcony, at least a few would be motivated to utilise that place for yoga or something of that sort. There are many measures that could be taken to ensure an active lifestyle for the
people
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.
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reducing the working
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might not be a viable option for many
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businessmen
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business men
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businessmen
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or small-scale companies,
people
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could be given the option to work remotely. For
this
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could save the time to spend in commutation enabling
people
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to go some fitness centres
instead
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.
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, governments
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could ensure that the offices are located near parks or sports
club
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clubs
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.
People
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are more likely to use the facilities closer to their workplace and it will encourage them to lead a healthy
life
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.
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,
people
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must be made aware of the consequences they might have to face in their later years due to lack of
exercises
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. In conclusion,
people
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these days are either too busy or stressed to
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lead
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an active
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.
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, the employers, government and
people
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together can take little steps to avoid
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.
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