Describe your dream holiday in the future . (Heading) You should say: where you would go and who you would go with (Point 1) where you would stay (Point 2) what you would do (Point 3) and explain why it would be the perfect holiday. (Point 4)

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Like everyone I really like to go on a

holiday

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with my friends or my family but, sometimes go

holiday

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with friends are better than going to the family.Because you know in the family you have some restriction.For ,instance you can drink with your friends but with family hmm I do not think so.If I had a chance to go on vacation wherever I want.In my guess most likely to go to

Paris

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.With who.I think with my girlfriend because as you know

Paris

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is a loved city and I am really into going here with her.Probably,we would go on the guided tour because we don't recognize

Paris

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and

Paris

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touristic sights.I suppose to guide will lead us.Actually,I will do surveys on the internet to go off the beaten track.We would live in a hotel maybe rental houses it depends on how many weeks we would stay.The

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job when we land in

Paris

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go and settle all the stuff in accommodation

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go to Eiffel Tower.It doesn't matter which time we arrived or how we tired.,Afterward maybe we can find a Guide tour and begin to explore

Paris

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.By the way 100% I would buy some local crafts for my family and for myself too.I am really interested in local foods

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,I would sample new food.It would be a

Holiday

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of a lifetime because I planed it very perfect and I have never spent a long time with my girlfriend it is

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a good opportunity for both of us.It is very wonderful to go on

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whom you fall in love with her or him.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

265 words

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Describe your dream holiday in the future . (Heading) You should say: where you would go and who you would go with (Point 1) where you would stay (Point 2) what you would do (Point 3) and explain why it would be the perfect holiday. (Point 4)

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Deforestation caused by human activities is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Space travel to the Moon is often cited as one giant leap for mankind. Yet some people argue that this achievement made little difference to our daily lives. What is your opinion?