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Some people think that the computers will be more intelligent than humans. Others are worried about the negative consequences of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #computers #humans #consequences
Whether to live and study abroad or it is better to stay in our
country
? The question can be answered with very different opinions
,
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 because everyone has a different perspective. If we are talking about education some
people
 can decide that their future has more realization in some other
country
. But if we are talking about living,
this
 is a personal decision. In my
opinion
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 living in
other
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country
 can be very helpful to improve the level of the language
that is
 native in the
country
. When we take the decision to move away, we have to think about the
people
 we are leaving. It’s hard to do that because you leave your home and the
people
 who you truly love. But
this
 can give you
a very good opportunities
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: You can meet new
people
, you will travel and see so many new things that some
people
 believe
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, you can find a new thing that will inspire you and will arouse new interest in you. If had the opportunity
of
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 leaving in some other
country
 I will definitely think a lot about it, but I won’t miss the chance. If we are talking about
the
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education, I think
this
 is a good way to organize better chances for your future. There are many professions which are more developed in some countries.
For
example
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 the Its jobs are a way more get on well in Germany, The Netherlands and so on than here in our lovely little
country
 Bulgaria. For my future
for now
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 I choose to study marketing
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 because I think that
this
 job will
suits
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 me and I will work it with pleasure. In my opinion
for now
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 not so important where you will study about
this
. I think that it’s more about the place and the
people
 you’re working with. If you love to travel and experiment with yourself
this
 is your chance, and you don’t have to miss it. But if you
feeling
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 unsure about something connected with
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travel or
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studying out of your habitat you think carefully.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • machine learning
  • superintelligent computers
  • algorithms
  • process data
  • ethical dilemmas
  • job displacement
  • surveillance
  • cyber-attacks
  • privacy and security
  • recognize patterns
  • strategic games
  • dependence
  • individual freedoms
  • proponents
  • outperform
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