It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
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argument and also
give my point of view.
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who is not knack they can be victorious in life and career as well as just need to develop their skills with hardcore work. For example
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