It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that

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there are some individuals around the globe who

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with natural flairs. While, others believe that, if a

person

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his interests effectively, they can be successful in life ,

although

he is not

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. In, the forthcoming essay, I will articulate both sides of

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argument and

also

give my point of view.

To begin

with, there are lots of

people

who

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with God aptitudes and those folks are considered as valuable wealth.

For instance

, Albert Einstein

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now

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as

most

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talented

person

in

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earth

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, his tremendous scientific inventions changed human’s life.

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, after his

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a group of scientists run

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research on him and they discovered a special neurone in his brain which was absent in average

people

brains.

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all aptitude

person

brain consists

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type of neurone , which makes them talented.

However

, on the other, there are

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of

people

who strongly believe that, if a

person

who is not knack they can be victorious in life and career as well as just need to develop their skills with hardcore work.

For example

, the founder of Alibaba , he is now one of the influential

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the globe and

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is hold

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now because of

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hard works, determinations and

dedications

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and top of that he is not gifted by any natural talents. To conclude, in my opinion, talented

people

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blessed but as

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normal human

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being

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anything

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any thing

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can

possible

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to achieve

with

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practicing

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our interests.